Anna’s Discovery
2 years ago in The Ink Well by onyema-norbert (51)
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What a wonderful story! It's inspiring to see how Anna was able to connect with the past through the journal and how it motivated her to take action in the present. The message that history has a way of repeating itself but people have the power to change the course of history is a powerful one. It's great to see how Anna was able to make a difference in her own community by organizing protests and fighting for what was right. Thank you for sharing this story!
This is an interesting tale, which traces how history repeats itself. We believe that adding some dialogue between your characters, as well as some action, would really make this story come to life!
These are two important elements of quality fiction. You have done a very nice job with the narrative, but it would be even better if you told some of the story in action, and added dialogue so the characters speak to each other. Here are a few resources for you:
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