I must say I love how you are telling us the story. The continuous vibration that I felt. The unending showing us the simple details made me picture out it. Don't misunderstand me but for me the simple story you shared made me feel like it's a reality. It's like most of the people experienced or having a life like this.
I liked it.
@mrnightmare.net 😂 😂 It is fiction, but also could be someone's reality somewhere in the world. I get you hehe.
Thank you for commenting and happy you enjoyed it. 🙂
Hello @mrnightmare.net,
Sweet words to a writer's ears. Writing so effective that the readers feels the scene is real. Thank you for supporting this author.