Aha haha. I can relate to this story. Lagos is such a crazy city with crazy people everywhere.
Dayo is a good man, he has a good heart. If it were some of those Lagos boys, they'd never plead.
I dislike the story continues. At some point, it sounded like they were going to meet at the same point of interview.
Great work here.
I also thought of that in my initial idea(them meeting at the interview). But it's meant to be a short story of a typical Lagos morning so I didn't want it to be too long.