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A Witch's Tongue
3 years ago in The Ink Well by mondraye (50)
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What a tragic story. My people always say that there is power in the tongue. Teni was so apprehensive for nothing and now she's filled with regrets. If only we can go back in time.
Great story.
In my country, we know the phrase "every word, is a prayer." It can be a terrible thing, if it is associated with unexpected and unexpected events. In any emotional condition, one still has to keep one's tongue so that an incident like Teny's does not happen again. Poor, widow Teny will feel guilty for the rest of her life, for what was really fate.
Thank you for joining The Ink Well and sharing your story, @mondraye. It is a story of unfortunate events and tragedy.
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You got the picture of the words in a different dimension. How did you manage to fix these words to create a wonderful story such as this is amazing.
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STOPHello, @mondraye! You clearly describe the tragedy of a woman who regrets having spoken without thinking! In her mentality, she confuses deep grief with guilt over her husband's death. You capture these feelings very well. Teni's emotion is contagious.
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Wow. I had to stay glued to this piece. You know what they say?
The power of life and death is in the tongue.
I love your creativity with words, it is magical altogether.
Nice lines bro I really enjoyed the story
Such a sad story. There is power in the tongue.
By the way, your writing is good. It's much easier picturing a story when it's written this way