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RE: A Failed Fiction

I want to be like Jimmy, not for the last part just for the first one, wanna travel wherever I would feel like too but life isn't giving enough cope to do that. Waiting for the right time to start exploring being carefree.

I can relate to that bus journey and that stoppage at Cumilla due to my last travel to Cox's Bazar by Bus. No one fell on my shoulder but yeah I was passing sleepless night though I was enjoying my ride with the rest of the party.

Bro, when you said Jimmy met a local, that local approached him and Jimmy agreed to stay at his house, I was like, "No way I am doing that ever." I do have heavy trust issues with complete strangers at the beginning. Well, a lesson learned through your fiction, check check, double check before making a move. But yeah, Jimmy kept moving.

Well written bro, It was so relatable and the ending was amazing too.

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Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. You are truly an inspiration.