I was stresses and , I was vexed
How does it even feel to be blessed
I had forgotten given up on peace inside,
My heart, my chest feels really tight
Then I asked for help from my subconscious, Desperate but with all the optimism I can yeild, I looked up to the sky to find a clue and What I saw was nothing good.
I saw just a regular white sky
Nothing new, nothing to think about
While the clouds looked so simple and hid the sun from my sight,
It kept shifting and soon I saw the bright light, Now that floating cloud has moved away And I see the brightest light of day.
And then I suddenly was aware
That my problems and worries were still not gone. It however made me see
That my problems will not be with me for long.
A way out I shall find and I will see the light,for I shall fight with my might
Then my mind became calm, it will be all right.
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Is this poetry?
It’s lovely written by the way.
Yes it is poetry..
And thank you so much @prayzz
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That's ok, I wasn't aware.
Won't happen again..