FICTION TALE ;The Smallest Giant

in The Ink Well10 months ago


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The world underwent a transformation. The hunger, for power sparked wars among nations leading to the creation of weapons. Eventually a class of bombs emerged that could decimate populations without causing structural damage. These bombs targeted people on a level while leaving structures intact. The consequences were profound; people experienced intelligence physical changes in size and the loss of mental abilities among other things. Undeniably the world had been forever altered.

Over the course of two centuries the planet became essentially uninhabitable due, to the lasting effects of these bombs. Only a select few—those who had invented this weapon—possessed the knowledge to survive and rebuild. The remaining individuals who managed to live through this ordeal were examples of evolution; their bodies and minds adapted in remarkable ways.

This brings us to the story of today, where an ordinary person became a hero. Through their intelligence and deep knowledge of components they transformed into a remarkable individual. Their inquisitive nature and natural curiosity led them to experiment with their DNA resulting in a boost to their intellectual capacity.

The newfound intellect empowered them to construct flying devices using parts. These innovative creations resembled bats. Had the ability to communicate telepathically with the protagonist while providing transportation across various locations.

To remain inconspicuous our unlikely hero sought refuge atop a towering building. Despite standing at a height of four meters they were still considered the smallest, among giants. Within a three weeks they managed to construct these flying contraptions using circuits and salvaged materials found within the vicinity of their residence.

As our hero gazes upon the cityscape from their perch, on the rooftop a profound sense of sadness and isolation engulfs them.
The buildings have been completely overrun by vegetation leaving no signs of life except, for a birds and other creatures. In this place a sense of loneliness prevails as if yearning for companionship and the need for someone to share thoughts and conversations, with.

Although he communicates with the bats using telepathy it's not a form of communication, with living creatures. Instead he interacts with an intelligence entity, which doesn't provide the connection and fulfillment he craves. He yearns for contact to feel loved and wanted.

Lost in thought our protagonist mutters to himself "Where are you?

In that instant he notices his bats in a frenzy swirling around something in the distance. Without hesitation he descends towards the building. Navigates through whatever obstacles lie between him and the source of his bats agitation. What comes into view fills him with excitement—a figure steps away from him. This giant bears a striking resemblance to himself; hair, a face adorned with an inviting smile.

Introducing himself eagerly our protagonist says,"Hello there! I am the giant in this world. Who might you be?" The woman responds warmly while wearing a smile,"I am also the giant, in this world."
Our friend had a smile, on his face. After engaging in a conversation, about his purpose of being here how they ended up in this place and their current location they came to the realization that they were meant to be together.


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Our main character introduces themselves by saying, "Hey I happen to be the giant around.. Who might you be?" The woman responds with a smile saying, "I too am the giant, in the world." Naturally our friend smiles back. They begin chatting about their reasons for being how they ended up in this place and where exactly they are.

Our friend shares that they have developed these bat creatures that help them locate food and other things in the city. That's how they found her. The next step is for the bats to carry them off by their feet as if floating in mid air. Together they embark on a journey, across the city and its surroundings. This is how they spend the rest of their lives happily on this apocalyptic planet after enduring wars and all manner of challenges.

This story reminds us of a moral; companionship has the power to brighten the loneliest existence. It teaches us that friendship and love can transcend any obstacle or physical difference. Above all it inspires us never to lose hope—to pursue our dreams just like our tiny giant did—to achieve what we truly desire.

That concludes my story, for today. I hope you found it enjoyable.


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Hello @mavisefia, We note that you previously wrote a story for the Inkwell and were advised that we require our authors to engage with at least two authors for each story submitted. We note that you have engaged with one author. When you have engaged with others, please let us know and we hope to return to your piece.

As it is, the piece is hard to follow. We note that you have created a post-apocalyptic world in which people evolve to have special skills and communicate with bats. However, it's very hard to follow all the details. Also, you have a practice of inserting commas in odd places. Please review your use of commas and see that they are appropriately placed.

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