I thought they were going to mate in the tea room when the glasses crashed to the floor. 😍
This is a very well written story of interplanetary romance. It stands fairly tense at the beginning, but then eases a bit when we realize that this is a story about forlorn lovers. You handle the sci-fi elements very nicely without getting bogged down in technical details and explanations.
His dark shades doubling as a mini-computer displayed a screen before his eyes. It triangulated Celia Cephrane's location to an orphanage just on the outskirts of the town. Within minutes, he faded and appeared in front of the entrance door.
You introduce a lot of technological advancements that instead of war are being used for love. This is a great angle and makes me wish female humans of this planet wrote more sci-fi lit. 😆
😆 I hope not! Thanks for the positive feedback. Science is not my thing so too much technical details will require some research that I'm not too good at. I'm pleased you like this story. !PIMP
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Some science fiction is rich in technical detail, but I think the best stories are those that show the human side of technology not just the engineering. Nicely done!