Fascinating and beautifully written! I wish Naimed had escaped with Lucila from that horrendous cave so they could be together forever. 😊
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Fascinating and beautifully written! I wish Naimed had escaped with Lucila from that horrendous cave so they could be together forever. 😊
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But that would have been a tad too sweet, wouldn't it? This was perfect. Not Cinderella. Not Snow White. @rinconpoetico7's very own charmed lady :))
I see what you mean and totally agree. 😊
Hehe... We went beyond conventions and gave it a touch of reality, the prince and the princess don't always end up together.
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Well said! A touch of reality in a story keeps us grounded so we don't keep our heads in the clouds all the time. 🙂
A love that could not be in this life, maybe in the next they can be together. I'm glad you liked the story.
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