Haha, with this lavish description of Holly, I understand why the main character in this story settled down with her finally and she became the mother of his children.
What an enchanting story! I love it, mostly because I love jazz music 😄.
This is good. You gave quite an impressive description of Holly's beauty and the setting of the jazz club. Excellent! 🍀
Yaaay! I am glad you enjoyed reading it. Heheh... I guess Holly is really enthralling 😘
A great comment. You are specific about why you like the story. This is encouraging to the author :)