Hello @kaerpediem Lovely story of young girl and boy who are obviously attracted to each other. In five days their relationship develops with increasing interest and conversation.

I tend to be wordy in my dialogue and have to work on that. However, I love the shortness of yours. But just as jayna stated, I had a slight confusion as who said what in some spots; especially when talking about the test.

Overall a nice, refreshing story of young, budding friendship. And, she managed to get a ride to school out of it.

Thanks for sharing.