Hello @esther-emmanuel I really enjoyed your character's entrance telling of his financial status, but still not able to secure love in his life. I feel this sets him up to meet the alluring woman who takes his breath and heart away and claims it for herself.

Excellent job on the description of the love interest he develops while visiting the nightclub. I was happy with the outcome of the story as well.

For me there was s small gap after he saw her. Did she return the attraction or did he have to win her over? It was mutual in the end for she must have been more than just a enticing figure of a woman, but one who could also hold his interest beyond the stage.

Lovely story of romance discovered for the character who obviously didn't set out looking for love. That's when you usually find it.

Take care and thanks for sharing.