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RE: The Icy Stretch

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Hello @bruno-kema. Young children can become victims in such a short space of time. Parents have to be vigilant at all times when outdoors. Your story is suspenseful. I knew the differences in their weight would be the factor for the son being able to withstand the break in the ice. A very dangerous situation to find oneself in when trying to determine whether to go after a child and thereby causes further danger.

I was hoping for a successful outcome and no one was seriously injured in the incident.

Thanks for sharing your story.

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Thank you for this insightful comment, i am glad you enjoyed my story.