It is a good story. I observe some writing flaws but it will become better as you write more. I look forward for more of your stories. Keep writing! Have some !PIZZA !discovery 15
You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
It is a good story. I observe some writing flaws but it will become better as you write more. I look forward for more of your stories. Keep writing! Have some !PIZZA !discovery 15
@ayeneya! I sent you a slice of $PIZZA on behalf of @juecoree.
Learn more about $PIZZA Token at hive.pizza (2/10)
Thank you so much! I will do better ^_^