Even if you are a beginner, as you say, your text presents, for me, very interesting aspects and very significant images between change and destiny. I particularly liked the last three verses: "I’m just a bugbear, like a / thorn in your flesh, i'm stuck / between love and accepting fate." Greetings, @okikithegreat.
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Wow, I enjoyed reading your perspective on my piece, very intelligent. I'm only new to the hive community, been doing poetry for over a decade now. Would appreciate if you could direct me towards other poetry/writing communities here. Thanks.