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A drop of sweat ran down dean's face as he stood there waiting in front of her father's mansion , he'd told Joan that he wasn't going to budge until he spoke to her. "where is she" he asked walter in a calm and respectful voice, "last time any of the maids saw her was this morning she was crying in her room, I'm getting really concerned young master" Walter said, "then why don't you let me in? it's gonna be fine I promise". Walter had been the butler to the stark family for decades, he took over from his father before Joan's dad ; Connor stark even became a man so he was pretty old now.
The old man had gotten to admire the relationship between the two lovebirds because he could tell it was real so he helped Dean sneak in and out the house once in a while. "okay fine,one last help, jeez the both of you are going to be the death of me. just don't lose her young man " Walter said as he sat down on the bench near the wall "go through that door " showing Dean her secret passage out the house "thank you very much Walter, I won't let you down I promise " Dean replied hurriedly, as he was starting to lose his composure.
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wiping his face with a handkerchief as he walked up the stairs memories flooded through his head as he too was quite shocked seeing how quickly things got to how they were. just three months ago he'd met Joan for the first time at the coffee shop, he remembered she'd been looking really stunning in her blue ....
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Where is the story? This is a good beginning. You set it up nicely, and then it stops abruptly. It would be great to learn what you had in mind when you started this. Looking forward to reading the rest....
Thank you for thinking of Ink Well.
I'm writing the second part, thanks.
Hi @ji33y. We're glad you've joined The Ink Well. Hopefully you have seen the feedback on your previous story. (You didn't respond to any of the comments or provide the requested images sources, so I'm not sure.) We are here to help and provide guidance to writers on their journey. If you are here to learn, you will be amazed by all the help you receive and the progress you can make!
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