Well that was a wild ride! Excellent story, @yaziris. I was completely caught up in it, wondering what was causing his strange experiences. I wondered if he would see his father, or find out what really happened to him.
The story took an interesting and significant shift at this point:
He started realizing that he didn't have to just be a spectator of the events around him but he could also through his thoughts interfere.
He could talk to people without speaking and they could hear. He could control what happens and what doesn't, all through his mind, and every tick of time could be steered by him like he could steer a wheel.
Wow, wouldn't that be amazing? And dangerous! No wonder the police wanted him, and then the CIA.
You must have had a lot of fun writing this. It is full of imagination! Well done!
It would, and it is very dangerous! Haha 😅
Thank you so much @jayna, I did enjoy writing it to the point where I was shocked when I saw the word count! I didn't realize I wrote ALL THAT! 😁
I believe he would. I didn't want to emphasize it, to leave the story open for the different interpretations since I was dealing with the descriptions of a known psychological disorder and its psychotic delusions.
Thank you so much for reading it, and my sincere apologies for the extended word count, I got caught up as I said, and then it was impossible to reduce its length. 😛
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