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RE: A Murmuring of Starlings

in The Ink Well3 months ago

There are so many delightful lines and poignant moments in this story, @samsmith1971. I actually had to read it in stints, due to household interruptions, and each time I went back to a few paragraphs before to make sure I didn't miss anything or lose the continuity. You have a lovely writing voice, and such wonderful sensibilities. The story is rich with meaning and full of surprises. And the ending is perfect. I wouldn't change a thing!

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Thank you @jayna for your kind words and encouragement. This means a lot! This story really did test my patience lol but it's one I conceived some time ago, and therefore has been a work in progress for too long! 😊 Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreciate you 💗💗