I enjoyed reading this imaginative futuristic story, @octaviusx. It is a bit hard to read in places, because of errors in wording and grammar. We have an excellent article that describes how to use Google Docs to draft your content, and then it will point out errors for you, and you can quickly fix them with one click. Please see the post Help for the Grammatically Challenged in our our catalog of fiction writing tips. You can use this app on a computer or phone. Following that step will help you improve your writing, and the resulting rewards. :-)