Mac was really brave to move into a house with ghosts! I enjoyed your story, @luck-jem. What a relief that he found someone who could get those ghosts contained so they stop making his life miserable.

Thanks for joining The Ink Well. I have some tips for you! One thing we always recommend to new writers is an article in our catalog of fiction writing tips, titled Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.

Oh, and I have one correction for you, about the phrase "on a faithful evening." That is a very common mistake! The actual expression is "one fateful evening." It's easy to remember once you know that it is about fate, or destiny, not about faith.

Good luck and keep writing!