I really enjoyed this story, @khoola. The action is fantastic. And I love the Arnold Schwarzenegger reference.
That said, there are a few gaps in narrative that would give us a more complete picture. Who are the "guys" he is speaking to? What reality was he expecting to return to when he thought he was going to the Great City, and how or why did he leave it in the first place? Also, how did his actions take him instead to the very dead Zeelis? Those were the questions I had at the end of the story.
You're a talented a writer and it's always great to read your work! I could definitely see you writing a sci-fi novel.
Thank you so much! That is too much praise 🤣, but I appreciate it, truly! 😍
Sci-fi is really hard to write for me... easy to imagine once the research is done but putting words to paper. My vocabulary is not enough 😂. Even with all that childhood playing scrabble I get lost in words 🤣.
Especially in describing something. Like I can imagine it but can't describe it 😂. that made it hard to fully tie loose ends on the story.
Guess i nee to read more Sci-fi books 😂
Again thank you very much!