Great story, @juanvegetarian. The bad things were piling up and the tension was building! I loved how you built the story conflict, and how it resolved in the end. Well done!
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Great story, @juanvegetarian. The bad things were piling up and the tension was building! I loved how you built the story conflict, and how it resolved in the end. Well done!
Thanks, @jayna. I thought that it was too long and wanted to edit out some parts. Maybe after a few weeks. 😀
!PIZZA