Great story, @bruno-kema! This is very suspenseful and gripping. There's nothing like a person stranded on ice with cracks forming all around! I was so relieved both the Caleb and Jamie were safe in the end. It did not look good for Jamie.

Would you believe I once wrote a similar story? It was published in a magazine called Portage. You can read it here. "Great minds think alike," as they say! :-)