Really fascinating post, and yes, it draws the reader in with enough mysticism to keep them engaged full bore. Nice composition here @grindan. Don't know if you want to know, but here are a couple of errors:
"This one threw bruce right off kilter" Bruce's name should be capitalized.
"Once the first rock fell from the precarious stack of Bruce's qualms, a unstoppable landslide" there is an "a" where it should be "an" in front of unstoppable.
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Thank you for the corrections @jamerussell, I'll update :)! I am happy that you enjoyed my tale, and stopped by to comment!