You had me hooked from the beginning; I loved the way you pulled me right into Sam’s suffering heart using Danny’s sense that something is amiss. Of course, Daniel is more concerned about discovery than discovering, but the mechanism works so well to create a panoramic view of Sam’s lost soul.
The exuberance of young love is so perfectly imparted by your skilled and accomplished writing that I felt my breath disappear more than once while engrossed. However, the real skill here is your definition of plan B, which is so full of hope and sprinkles of the joys to come.
Exceptionally gorgeous Sammy, Sam!