Quite a suspenseful one!
I was gripped from the very moment we saw Caleb trying to walk out of the ice to his parents. For me, I don't think it's a really good idea to visit such a precarious place like a winter home situated next to a frozen lake with a six-year old. And even if that happens, one must never let such a child out of sight.
Anyway, I'm glad that this didn't turn out to be a tragic.
You've come up with yet another beautifully and expertly written piece. Well done, Bruno!
Thank you very much, I'm sure the parents will think twice before vacationing in the cabin later in the future.