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RE: The Icy Stretch

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Quite a suspenseful one!
I was gripped from the very moment we saw Caleb trying to walk out of the ice to his parents. For me, I don't think it's a really good idea to visit such a precarious place like a winter home situated next to a frozen lake with a six-year old. And even if that happens, one must never let such a child out of sight.

Anyway, I'm glad that this didn't turn out to be a tragic.

You've come up with yet another beautifully and expertly written piece. Well done, Bruno!

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Thank you very much, I'm sure the parents will think twice before vacationing in the cabin later in the future.