This is a great tale @pjpavan! I loved the tongue in cheek feeling of the "success story" it really summarizes the bitter feeling such a terrible tragedy must leave behind. It is sweet that Jesus found a way to still make some of their dreams come true at least, even if it was alone.

I wanted to give you a tip. Many authors find that it is beneficial to draft their posts in google documents. You have quite a few run-on sentences here, which takes away from an otherwise great story. Google docs will outline areas that need punctuation, which will really bring your tales together!

I hope that advice helps you along while you explore your love of writing. 😁 Thank you again for the great read, and I hope you have an awesome weekend!