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RE: Let's start from the ending.

You have written a story that is an extended metaphor for a conception of human history, @warpedpoetic.
I perceive this text as an attempt to give us a philosophical perspective. Your language is very cultured and you seem to have spent time choosing the exact words to construct an allegorical tale.
I enjoy reading you, thank you for this story.

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An allegory? After your comment I have to look the story again and you are right. It is indeed an allegory of what Africa is in most parts. Thank you for reading this.