It is interesting this voice that narrates after his death, as he watches his fiancée in a wait that will never be fulfilled.
The voice can see her fully, in her illusion, in her waiting and in the confrontation of the truth.
It's a good narrative exercise, @sirpoe .
Thank you very much for taking the time to read my story, I'm glad you liked it. I will be trying to publish this kind of story, as long as I keep learning and enjoying other stories. A hug for you