Greetings, @didiee.
You present a very believable character who displays her emotions in a straightforward manner. Your writing makes us understand her. I should note that the @theinkwell community has rules that prevent us from voting on some content. We want to be a community where anyone, even child readers, can approach. One part of your story violates this desire of @theinkwell to be a safe place for everyone. You are a very efficient writer. We hope that, by abiding by the rules, you will give us the chance to heal you as you deserve.
Okay, noted. My sincere apologies for violating the community's rule
It wasn't intentional. The story has been edited to have a different introduction. I hope this is better and is still valid as the work is not copied and it's strictly fictional. Thank you.