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RE: Tracks

in The Ink Well4 years ago (edited)

You made me feel a complex set of emotions as I followed the conflict of this athlete, @bruno-kema . I like that you have chosen this discipline of the hundred metres where feelings run over and there is no time to process them. The speaker has only a few seconds to be coherent with the world and with his quest. That is very intense. You did it very well

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 4 years ago  

Thank you very much @gracielaacevedo for your kind words, i'm really glad you enjoyed the story.