This story of a love lost is amazing, it is interesting to see how Esmeralda arrived just in time to save Justine. It would have end up a tragedy if the Esmeralda had not showed up.
hello @glory-clarkson, your image sourcing is still not correct and we are unable to curate your submission until you rectify this. We would highly recommend that you take the time to read our previous feedback which encouraged you to engage with other members of the community, to support at least two other posts for each post you submit, and to make yourself aware of the attributes of fiction that we are looking for here in The Ink Well.
Thank you @theinkwell for your guidance I will be sure to show support and engage with others as well.
I've started reading on your guidelines for fiction and so far I'm loving it.
Thank you.
That's really good to hear. The resources available are excellent and have helped many writers to develop and hone their craft. I have used many of them myself! Writing fiction has some key metrics that need to be employed in order to draw the reader in, keep them interested, and get them invested in the lives of the characters, and the outcome of the story. Without a good hook, character and story development, a conflict with resolution, and balance between narrative, action, and dialogue, you can't really have a good piece of fiction writing. Instead of lifting off the page, the writing can feel a little flat. It's really enjoyable when you begin to experiment more beyond pure narrative writing. We look forward to seeing what you bring us next!
@glory-clarkson please take note of The Ink Well's stance on violence, especially towards women. We kindly request that you read through the FAQ and guidelines and veer away from these topics moving forward. You also might want to review and edit your posts before publishing as your narrative ends mid- sentence and I'm fairly sure that was not intended.
This story of a love lost is amazing, it is interesting to see how Esmeralda arrived just in time to save Justine. It would have end up a tragedy if the Esmeralda had not showed up.
@toluwanispecial that was one of my favorite parts as I wrote it I'm glad you loved it too, thank you for reading.
What an interesting story
Lucille got some nerves, such an evil woman. She wasn't even ashamed involving her daughter, Justine in her evil acts
Though I felt so bad in the end because she shoot Esmeralda however I am very happy she did not get away with her wrong doings
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Thank you for reading.
hello @glory-clarkson, your image sourcing is still not correct and we are unable to curate your submission until you rectify this. We would highly recommend that you take the time to read our previous feedback which encouraged you to engage with other members of the community, to support at least two other posts for each post you submit, and to make yourself aware of the attributes of fiction that we are looking for here in The Ink Well.
Thank you @theinkwell for your guidance I will be sure to show support and engage with others as well.
I've started reading on your guidelines for fiction and so far I'm loving it.
Thank you.
That's really good to hear. The resources available are excellent and have helped many writers to develop and hone their craft. I have used many of them myself! Writing fiction has some key metrics that need to be employed in order to draw the reader in, keep them interested, and get them invested in the lives of the characters, and the outcome of the story. Without a good hook, character and story development, a conflict with resolution, and balance between narrative, action, and dialogue, you can't really have a good piece of fiction writing. Instead of lifting off the page, the writing can feel a little flat. It's really enjoyable when you begin to experiment more beyond pure narrative writing. We look forward to seeing what you bring us next!
By the way, be sure to look at your last sentence. It just stops in the middle. So your story is not complete.
@glory-clarkson please take note of The Ink Well's stance on violence, especially towards women. We kindly request that you read through the FAQ and guidelines and veer away from these topics moving forward. You also might want to review and edit your posts before publishing as your narrative ends mid- sentence and I'm fairly sure that was not intended.