Welcome to The Ink Well, @giftjames. Thank you for joining us, and for taking the time to read and comment on the work of other writers.
In this story, Tony seems to have viewed his dream as a real-life cautionary tale, which has brought about a complete change in behavior. (And then he decides to devote himself to Christ, which is certainly an interesting interpretation of the dream.)
We often provide feedback on stories, and we have a few notes for you. Something is quite mixed up in your story. It appears that you have most of the story appearing above the image, and then the beginning is repeated again after the image, but the second version includes the end of the story. You might want to fix that so readers are not confused. Additionally, we usually suggest that our authors avoid overly religious themes, because we are a very diverse community of individuals who come from different ethnic and spiritual backgrounds.
There are, of course, countless things to write about. In fact, we provide many different story ideas to help our community members to think creatively. You can find 150 different ideas in these three articles:
Welcome to The Ink Well, @giftjames. Thank you for joining us, and for taking the time to read and comment on the work of other writers.
In this story, Tony seems to have viewed his dream as a real-life cautionary tale, which has brought about a complete change in behavior. (And then he decides to devote himself to Christ, which is certainly an interesting interpretation of the dream.)
We often provide feedback on stories, and we have a few notes for you. Something is quite mixed up in your story. It appears that you have most of the story appearing above the image, and then the beginning is repeated again after the image, but the second version includes the end of the story. You might want to fix that so readers are not confused. Additionally, we usually suggest that our authors avoid overly religious themes, because we are a very diverse community of individuals who come from different ethnic and spiritual backgrounds.
There are, of course, countless things to write about. In fact, we provide many different story ideas to help our community members to think creatively. You can find 150 different ideas in these three articles:
Again, welcome and good luck with your writing!