GRACE FINALLY FOUND JOHN

in The Ink Well3 years ago (edited)

ADVENTURE


life has always been an adventure for John right from the day he was born until his dying day. Everything was pretty much like a journey for him. For others, their adventures are very much memorable and forever lovely but for John, he wishes he did never be born to embark on such a life adventure. Life is full of risk, tournaments and predicaments, and others.

So John happens to be the first and only child of his parents who care less about how he fares or what things happened to his life. It was quite sad that through the unethical nature of his parents and the lack of love there had for him there had to sell him out, for there claim they were in a stage of their lives where there needed money and the boy was doing nothing for them so there had to sell him out.

The couple who bought him, were very much ready to take good care of him for their lack of children so things began to take shape in his life, he started schooling, but along the line, within an interval of 1 year, John knew parents died in a very fatal accident and they both died. After this it all went backward for John he was left with nothing and since nobody knew him for his adopted parents had no siblings or anyone that was how he was taken to an orphanage home.

In John's new home it was hell for him, he barely ate, had no new clothes, and had nothing to write home about. What a journey for him, a life full of turbulence and adventures. Quite sad but life goes on, as days went on, John was later adopted by another set of parents but there it was hell for him as well. Quite unfortunate for this young blood to go through all these things at such an early stage of his life.

Since he couldn't take all the maltreatment from his new home he took to his hills and left the house, only to go fend for himself outside. As God could make it later on a helper came who took him in as a household but provided all he needed for him later on he saved enough money as he needed and decided to tell his boss he was wanting to start a business with his earnings his boss found it very interesting and decided to support him with some amount of money to boast help him stock the business he was wanting to start.

As years passed by, his business expanded, and everything changed for John, quite a life adventure for him for it has really been hell growing up, it was quite a struggle he cried as he was narrating his life ordeal to his friend. It has been quite an adventure for you John said to his friend, Thanking God you scaled through and made a life for yourself.

Thanks for reading dear friends.
Best regards, @gi-de-on

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Life certainly has been an adventure for John, the kind of adventure we wish no child may have. Fortunately, his ambition and character pulled him through.

One thing you might pay attention to in describing setting is to let us (as readers) 'see' the circumstances of John's life. In the first paragraph, for example, you might describe the home or parents who let him go so we can feel we are in John's circumstance.

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I love this, it made me feel as chills but in the end John ce victorious.
Nicely written..

Thanks dear friend. I am glad you like it

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A heart warming read, life can be full of positive turns :-)

Yes dear, we just have to get that courage to hold on and continue pushing

Sometimes moving out is the best option as this may pace way for you. Thank God that John left the house to fend for himself.

Yes oh.. Thanks for your comment dear friend

John's zeal for success got him going. Nice story.

Thanks for your comment dear friend

You may not find way if you remain just in one place, but leaving your present situation should be the best.

Indeed dear friend. Thanks for your comment