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RE: Starting Over | The Ink Well Prompt #22

in The Ink Well3 years ago

It is nice to read such a lovely story. Reencounters are always like that.

I got surprised when I realized the man was her father and not her boyfriend or something alike.

Good writing!!!

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Surprised? Haha! That was the intent, to keep readers in suspense about who 'the man' was before Selena meets him.

I'm glad you like my story. Thank you! 🙂