@rosardente01 Your story looks like a poem full of pictures, its expressions are very good, but the story must have entertainment, fear, malice, mystery, excitement, greed, happiness, and sorrow, I think so. But it is not necessary that everyone should go by my thinking.
Thank you @fantom222. It wasn't meant to be a story. My bad.
@rosardente01 I checked you are new, don't mind I hope you will learn very fast, by the way, your looks are very good.
Thank you @fantom22
That is fantastic advice, @fantom22. I love the list of elements that can spice up a story! May I use that in a future post for our writing tips section? 😄
Welcome @rosardente01. You've received lots of advice and guidance, so I will just welcome you and say we are looking forward to your stories.
@jayna You are welcome, madam, all have learned from you, and you can use it wherever you want, I am proud that you have given so much value to my suggestion.
If you have permission, I would like to give a small suggestion too and I have already apologized for that.