@billionz If you had read @theinkwell rules you would have known this community does not accept any incident of mistreatment of women. And in your story, the incident of rape of the heroine has been shown. So I don't think your story will be valid.
You made Mary's son the governor in a very quick sequence of events in this story and did not even give its details etc.
With apologies, I am waiting for some beautiful upcoming story of yours.