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RE: Forever Together - Creative Nonfiction #44

in The Ink Welllast year

The descriptions of the spreading fire and smoke effectively build a vivid scene. Details like the smoke seeping under the door and the flames spreading towards the living room evoke a sense of escalating danger.

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Yes, it does. There was an impending danger from the kitchen. Gracefully, no one could doubt it unlike when Josh perceived the smell of burning barbecue.
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