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RE: Flames Of Love.

in The Ink Well2 years ago

This story. I have such encounters written in my head all the time. Except mine always has nothing to do with an enemy caused by a man, fire, or farmlands, nor two misunderstandings between friends.

In my head, it has always been about the tribes in my country. How one tribe doesn't ever want to have their children married to the other.

Let me not bore you. You did great with the description, setting, and ending. It's a pity that they can be together. Maybe, in the future, their family will settle their differences. I hope it wouldn't be too late for the young fellas though.

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Happens here too.... different tribes disagreeing on marriage between themselves. It annoying sometimes and the children also suffer this cause before we can't help who we fall in love with. Thanks so much for the comment!

That's true.... We really can't help who we fall in love with 🥺

You're welcome 🤗