I never saw this coming.. What a twist! I was thinking maybe he was rich and pretending to be poor and homeless just to see who helps him.. I never knew it was something very different from what I was thinking... Kudos to you for this very interesting piece... I enjoyed reading everybit of it.
Good a thing Diana was bold enough to do what Johnny asked of her... She helped the FBI to arrest a wanted criminal.
I am so happy Diana ended up becoming an agent.. Nice story line
@dreemport directed me to your post
Thanks, bro, I am trying to learn to write fiction. I am kinda imagining things and posting them here. :)
And you did so well with this... Kudos to you. I enjoyed reading it..