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RE: STANDING UNDER THE MOON || INKWELL PROMPT #49

in The Ink Well3 years ago

The tear escapes its prison, but we know that your narrator is in a prison. He is no longer himself, nor is he in control of himself. He has one last free impulse, which escapes with the tear: Save Lara

Exactly, you get it all and you put it in the best kind of words. His one impulse was to save her in any way possible.

Thank you for sharing this story with the Ink Well community. Have you commented on the stories of two other writers in the community? Thank you!

Thank you for dropping by and dropping a Comment ..yes I have! . They were amazing stories, had fun reading them.

You're welcome! ❤️✅