Excellent work my friend @r-nyn ๐
You managed to describe that great scenario surrounding Rebecca as she immersed herself in a world of thoughts full of memories and nostalgia.
You needed only several paragraphs to capture two such intriguing themes as love and death are.
Congratulations on your beautiful story ๐๐๐๐๐ thank you for sharing it with us ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Actually, I wanted it in a rainy setting, but then the bird wouldn't be there, and Rebecca certainly couldn't hold that cigarette out of the window; so, changed it to this and am glad to learn it worked well.
Thank you for your thoughtful identification, it means a lot.
