THE PARALYZED MILLIONAIRE

in The Ink Well3 years ago (edited)

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There was a man named Jack. Jack was unemployed. He went to a paralyzed millionaire name Chris to sign a paper so that he could get unemployment benefits. Chris as him to come back the next for his signed papers. Jack got back home after he had appeared for six months and never called. His mother was disappointed that he had gone for six months and now he's shown up out of nowhere as if her home was a hotel. His mother kicks him out and tells him she's done with his lies and not to come back.

Jack when back to Chris who offer a signed paper and a job opportunity. Chris was so sure Jack won't last one month. He was offered the job. He was taught to take care of Chris. Jack was getting tired of the job after discovering he must put not on some weird stockings and also clean his butt after using the bathroom.

Chris's friends were concerned about him because he had a criminal record but he told his friends he like him because he doesn't pity him and he doesn't mind joking around with him. Chris was having an online relationship with a girl named Ellen but he hasn't met her in person. Jack feels their relationship is boring and that he should be more direct with her. Jack was very surprised that they had been communicating for five-month and they never exchanged pictures. Though, they had been communicating through letters. Jack decided to search the letter to see if he could find Ellen's number. Luckily, if he finds her number in one of the letters and obliges Chris to call her. They had a nice conversation.

Jack managed to convince Chris to exchange pictures with Ellen and chooses one of him in a wheelchair. Ellen sent Chris a letter, telling him she was beautiful and they should meet in person. Chris fixed a date with Ellen at a restaurant. After waiting for more than an hour at the restaurant, Chris got annoyed may she was no longer coming and called Jack to come and pick him up not knowing Ellen was on her way into the restaurant and they were leaving.

Jack arranged another date for Chris and Ellen that doesn't mind the wheelchair. Some months later, they got married.

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Hello @ayin, you write an interesting story about some social struggles by a disabled man. Lucky he has some good friends and found a good woman to marry eventually.

Have you considered Google Docs for example to draft your stories? It's a great way to find and fix grammar and mistakes in the text, which it highlights and you can fix them by clicking on them.

This would help you improve your writing!

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