This is a wonderful story. We are prepared to despair with the man at the end when he is robbed, but then his wisdom prevails. The story had a Jack in the Beanstalk feel to it at first, but you took it into a very different and more sophisticated direction.
Extremely well told. To improve the readability of your story, you might check pronoun gender for consistency. This is very likely a translation issue, but since the story is so good, why not make it even better.
Thank you for submitting this excellent story to the Ink Well community.
Plagiarism is strictly against our community rules. The story will be muted. If you publish additional stories in our community that are not your original work, you will be muted permanently from The Ink Well and reported to organizations that police the platform against plagiarism.
This is a wonderful story. We are prepared to despair with the man at the end when he is robbed, but then his wisdom prevails. The story had a Jack in the Beanstalk feel to it at first, but you took it into a very different and more sophisticated direction.
Extremely well told. To improve the readability of your story, you might check pronoun gender for consistency. This is very likely a translation issue, but since the story is so good, why not make it even better.
Thank you for submitting this excellent story to the Ink Well community.
Thank you for correcting the grammar of my writing.
I finally realized that some words or sentences weren't quite right.
I have made grammar changes and improvements in writing my stories.
And thank you for liking my story, and hopefully useful for those who read. ;)
Unfortunately, we must revise our assessment of your story. It is plagiarized from this one: https://steemit.com/steemit/@dhiya/inspirational-story-the-dented-coin-e0df6a6b64ac5.
Plagiarism is strictly against our community rules. The story will be muted. If you publish additional stories in our community that are not your original work, you will be muted permanently from The Ink Well and reported to organizations that police the platform against plagiarism.