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3 years ago in The Ink Well by aimharryianne (62)
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A love story in the chaos of the virus and an accident :D
It's like their fate was written in the stars and they somehow just kept gravitating back to each other ...
I thought it was funny though they took off their masks so they could recognize each other... "love" knows no fear ;p
This is a clever interpretation of the prompt. It is a car wreck that brings Sergio and Amara together. It is a shipwreck that allows them to reacquaint. But it all starts with a lyric:
Coincidentally, Sergio does give Amara life by taking her to the hospital.
You tie the different pieces of this narrative together convincingly. We all like to believe in a mix of happenstance and intention in our lives.
It's a nice story, and I was in the mood for a happy ending :)
What a sweet and romantic story, @aimharryianne. Amara and Sergio seem destined to be together. The pendant is an interesting way to help them find one another again!
What a beautiful love story! It's like the stars aligned for Amara and Serge to meet again through the pendant after they were separated.
I noticed you referred to Serge as 'it' severally. You may want to correct that. Nicely written! Keep it up! 😊
Now this right here ... an honorable man does his duty by a woman who proves as honorable as he ... may they sail off together with no wrecks into a bright future! Well done!
A maiden falls in love with the man who saves her life.
This is a line of love stories from the Middle Ages, @aimharryianne
Very nice story. It had a sweet plot! Thanks you
A romance story with just enough coincidence to stretch our credibility, but also enough reality to allow acceptance of the happy outcome. Serendipity is often the mystery element in a love story.
Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community. And thank you for engaging with other writers in the community.
We get very few love stories and this one was so sweet. I like the sense of urgency you created and the eventual meeting.