Welcome, @officialvictor

I just read your introductory post and am impressed by your references. Both @cool08 and @mrenglish are respected writers in this community. With this story, you represent them well.

The conflict between Angel and Raymond is very believable. Often, when someone moves forward in life, friends may feel threatened. They may feel they are being 'left behind'. Angel's stage fright is believably evoked in the story. Any one of us who has performed on stage can relate to that.

Your use of the prompt is ingenious. Great first story. Thank you for sharing this with us. One aspect of writing for the Inkwell that is important is engagement. Look around at other stories writers have offered this week. Read them and comment. This will help them and will also help you to develop your skills.

Keep writing :)