Thank you @katleya

You are so correct. I consulted the Internet many times as I wrote. Wanted to get the details correct. Even stuff I thought I knew, I checked it out so I wouldn't make a mistake.

Writing a story is like making a slow-cooking stew, except with the story some of the ingredients are not known in advance :)

I love your writing. Do hope to see more of it in the Inkwell.

Take care, @katleya