It's quite a trick to get inside the head of an adolescent. Many times, writers overdo it and it rings false. This time, it rings true. The rapid development of the 'romance' also rings true. There is chemistry, and there is youth. Not always a safe combination, but certainly exciting. That's what comes through here. The young lady's excitement at taking a risk, pushing what is allowed to the edge.

I like the story. I like the running dialogue Lori has with the reader. Well done!