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RE: The ink well fiction #31/ Fork on the road.

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Hello @iyimoga, I like your take on the prompt very much. The story is heartwarming and has an interesting twist. A literal fork in the road separated them when they were children.

Good job (though I do agree with @jayna that the story would shine so much more if you could edit out the grammatical errors). It's a great story. I would like to see it shine :)