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RE: Note to My Inner Child

in Self Improvement2 years ago

Stirring, moving, inspiring!
Love this: For all the abundance, "there is work to be done. Everything you need is at your disposal but it meets you where your self-worth stands." And your willpower, your determination, your discipline.

and this:

The universe reserves the right to give or take but it also heavily awards grateful beings.

This!

Have you remembered to breathe yet? Or are you waiting on death so that you can rant in your grave about the living?

Just one tip here for writers:
Breathe, with an -e, is the verb
Breath is the noun
And I know you know that. The last "breath" looks like a typo.

Well done!

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I love it when my work collides with a reader who finds it relatable or close to your kind words. It acts as a reminder that I am still part of the greater collective. Thank you :)

Yes. Typo. I am unable to edit my thoughts most of the time as I tend to restructure everything or not write altogether. Thank you for the tip and the correction. Enables me to better my writing 🙂